tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8572754717743284391.post1429251433261307073..comments2023-04-27T01:58:09.392-07:00Comments on The Brave: Poetry Thursday - Its a Free Daystrausshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10277562911746970978noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8572754717743284391.post-13868940024458277712007-05-05T04:23:00.000-07:002007-05-05T04:23:00.000-07:00Melodious. Even the unwashed window sounds good. L...Melodious. Even the unwashed window sounds good. LOL. Like the shadows it describes, your poem is "gentle and subdued," but there.Rethabilehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03523368313680103826noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8572754717743284391.post-51069690046924790372007-05-04T21:13:00.000-07:002007-05-04T21:13:00.000-07:00Yes, your imagery is amazing...This week, I believ...Yes, your imagery is amazing...<BR/>This week, I believe I have been visited in this manner. Your imagery is beautiful...the picture adds to your words. <BR/><BR/>I love visiting here...Mariehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03165578165979664051noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8572754717743284391.post-86870627239570979252007-05-03T11:05:00.000-07:002007-05-03T11:05:00.000-07:00I agree- the imagery is just beautiful here...I agree- the imagery is just beautiful here...Reginahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14287107184977896696noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8572754717743284391.post-59225848838119568432007-05-03T10:23:00.000-07:002007-05-03T10:23:00.000-07:00Beautuful imagery. There are some great lines in t...Beautuful imagery. There are some great lines in there.gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8572754717743284391.post-16602503184188762632007-05-03T09:29:00.000-07:002007-05-03T09:29:00.000-07:00What an interesting concept, bruised shadows, neve...What an interesting concept, bruised shadows, never occurred to me, but now I cannot forget them. Profound. Thanks for sharing!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8572754717743284391.post-22629374983712229112007-05-03T07:08:00.000-07:002007-05-03T07:08:00.000-07:00"bruised shadows" -- very captivating image. Nice..."bruised shadows" -- very captivating image. Nice write Strauss!<BR/><BR/>--and so it goes--<BR/>...RobRob Kistnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11365982588165098990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8572754717743284391.post-91791640063658599812007-05-03T03:55:00.000-07:002007-05-03T03:55:00.000-07:00Almost a prose poem - it has an effective cadence ...Almost a prose poem - it has an effective cadence that matches the subject matter well.Paulinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14555472024981357622noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8572754717743284391.post-26932468432677994772007-05-03T03:02:00.000-07:002007-05-03T03:02:00.000-07:00Hi Strauss, I like the way you highlight the choic...Hi Strauss, I like the way you highlight the choices we all make NOT to cleanse the glass. That has me thinking this morning.Sashahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00483234172434544811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8572754717743284391.post-45591993883042324452007-05-03T01:43:00.000-07:002007-05-03T01:43:00.000-07:00I like that last line, Strauss,Those gentle bruise...I like that last line, Strauss,<BR/><BR/><I>Those gentle bruised shadows that dance for me.</I><BR/><BR/>Nice.Scottyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10532475769646281689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8572754717743284391.post-39242532618740136172007-05-03T00:43:00.000-07:002007-05-03T00:43:00.000-07:00'Speckled in last spring’s dried raindrops'This is...'Speckled in last spring’s dried raindrops'<BR/><BR/>This is my favourite line. That's quite an image! Nicely written piece.Beamanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10516397458228874124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8572754717743284391.post-27256022216383313652007-05-03T00:22:00.000-07:002007-05-03T00:22:00.000-07:00there is something magical about dusty bruised lig...there is something magical about dusty bruised light like this you describe.Crafty Green Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8572754717743284391.post-13740272166906900582007-05-02T15:54:00.000-07:002007-05-02T15:54:00.000-07:00That was beautiful, Strauss.That was beautiful, Strauss.jeaniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17322709527738134797noreply@blogger.com